August 25, 2011
Risa Miller’s second novel is the difficult story of the family relationships between two daughters, Honey and Susan, and their father. Honey and Susan lost their mother to breast cancer when they were barely teenagers and Honey, in particular, never healed from the loss. When their father and his second wife, Evelyn, become baal tshuvah following a trip to Israel, Honey sees her father’s decision as another brutal abandonment, one that she can’t possibly tolerate. Honey’s conflicted and angry internal dialogue with religion intensifies when obligations to family friends force her involvement in a neighborhood dispute with an observant Jewish day school.
Unfortunately, the narrative of the book stalls out after its initial set up. For long stretches Honey ruminates on her anger. Her understanding of her emotions, her personal philosophy, and Judaism don’t evolve because Honey’s pent up fury overwhelms her world, and the pages of the book. As a result her story is an exhausting and somewhat tedious read. Even the novel’s resolution, from which Honey does gain some comfort, depends on a construct and not on the kind of character development that could make this book, with such fundamentally important questions at its core, truly profound.
Unfortunately, the narrative of the book stalls out after its initial set up. For long stretches Honey ruminates on her anger. Her understanding of her emotions, her personal philosophy, and Judaism don’t evolve because Honey’s pent up fury overwhelms her world, and the pages of the book. As a result her story is an exhausting and somewhat tedious read. Even the novel’s resolution, from which Honey does gain some comfort, depends on a construct and not on the kind of character development that could make this book, with such fundamentally important questions at its core, truly profound.